Part Two:
SONGWRITING MECHANICS
Songwriters come in all shapes and sizes—young, old, from
all walks of life. It is a God given gift, designed to be given
back to Him for His glory, but many recipients choose to use this
precious gift for themselves and thus write worldly music. But for
those of you who want to use it for its intended purpose, here are
some tips that may be of help.
1) Inspiration: Every song begins with an idea, a thought. A good
one is very hard to come by. I have found that some of my best ideas
have come from very simple things. In fact, the more simple the
thought, the better it will relate to the listener. If the subject
concerns something from everyday life or a familiar scripture, the
listener feels instantly connected to the song. Look at the greatest
of titles: “Amazing Grace,”“ How Great Thou Art,”
“There Is A Fountain.” These titles (ideas) are simple,
familiar, and to the point.
2) Development: Developing the song from the idea should have
the same simple flow, always with familiar language and clean, understandable
lines. Economy is one of the most important issues in developing
a song. You are writing approximately twelve lines that deal only
with that one idea, and saying it in the least words is the goal.
Every line should be totally clear and never veer from the main
theme. The title must be used at least
twice in the song—always, at least once in the chorus.
3) First Verse: Writing a song is telling a story about the title.
The opening line of the first verse must set the stage for the entire
song. It’s like building a house and the first line is the
foundation. Example:“ Oh, Lord, my God, when I in awesome
wonder consider all the worlds thy hands have made.”
1) The song is directed, spoken, as a prayer to the Lord.
2) It establishes the thought: “The awesome wonder of you,
Lord, and here
are my feelings about you.”
3) The most important word in this opening line is “consider.” It
opens the
way for the singer to tell the Lord what they have considered
in thinking of
Him.
4) The last line in the first verse should set up and lead into
the chorus.
Chorus: It must either
open or close with the title. It should be the most
simple 4 lines of the song and not Biblical truth that’s
difficult to
understand. Write these 4 lines as though you were talking to a
young
Christian with basic knowledge and limited experience. Writing
in this
manner will keep you grounded in the thought and theme of the song.
Second Verse: Think of it as the last chapter
of the story. Pull the theme
of the song together in one final statement. The last line of this
verse
needs finality either in the subject of the song, or using the
title once
again to put an explanation mark on the entire work.
Tag: Write a tag only when it enhances what has
already been said. A tag
must have thrilling content to be of any value.
Length: Two verses and a chorus are usually enough,
and sometimes three
verses are necessary to complete the story properly. If you write
more than
three verses, you will probably be the only one who will ever sing
the song.
More than 4 lines in a verse and 4 in a chorus are unusual. If you find
it necessary to write more make sure they that it doesn’t lengthen the
song
to the point of becoming an epic. Very long songs are impossible to pitch
to today’s artists.
Poetry: “Poetic License” is almost
always unacceptable, meaning, if you
can’t come up with a word to make a good rhyme, you may need
to change the
word with which you are trying to rhyme. Good rhyming structure
is 1st& 2nd rhyming and 3rd & 4th rhyming, or 1st and 3rd and/or 2nd & 4th
lines.
It’s also perfectly acceptable to rhyme only the 2nd & 4th
lines, but the
4th or last line must be rhymed.
Sometimes, in rare instances, all 4 lines are rhymed. There are
many good
helps available for this: Rhyming books, Thesaurus, and internet.
Avoid: 1) Using songwriting to state a pet peeve,
or to make a point based
on personal opinion. A song is not a podium to air grievances.
2) Inverted
sentences are bad songwriting. Novice songwriters do this often
because
they will not take time and effort to say it a different way. Example: “I
will go to the Throne of grace.” Inverted: “To the
throne of grace, I will
go.” All songwriters invert at times, but it becomes a bad
habit. About
the only style that uses inversions is majestic, old English hymns,
otherwise lyrics should be written in conversationally style.
Melody: There is nothing here about melody, but
I will say a couple of
things. There are only 7 notes to write fresh and exciting melody
for every
song. Just be sure the melody fits the song and the lyrics in each
verse
contains the same number of syllables so the melody notes can be
sung with
each syllable in every verse. You don’t have to have a music
degree to
write good melody, but it does have to perfectly fit the lyrics
in both
phrasing and content.
Craftmanship: Most novice writers are under the
false impression that
however the lyrics and melody first appear in their mind is the
way God gave
them and, thus, must not be altered. However, ask any seasoned
writer and
they will tell you that very, very, rarely will a song come instantly
complete and perfect.
If God has given you a talent for songwriting He expects you to
work at it, treating it as an art, a craft, your work for Him. You
must remain open minded, ever learning and improving.
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